Reflecting you can identify basic generic conventions of aspects of the shower scene in "Psycho".
Next steps:
1) Vocabulary. Avoid using "bad", this is simplistic and lacks sophistication. Instead: menacing: disturbing: threatening. Use a theaurus
2) Developing analysis. You have made no mention of sound nor lighting. Look at your coursework booklet for good examples of analysis and guidance about organisation. Pages 12, 14 and 15.
I am sending you all an email with an attachment on how to improve your case studies and planning.
I like the way you have organised your case study and the points you've made about Marion's blood going down the plug hole which is a convention linked to the swirling smoke of noir thrillers of the 40's and 50's.
Reflecting you can identify basic generic conventions of aspects of the shower scene in "Psycho".
ReplyDeleteNext steps:
1) Vocabulary. Avoid using "bad", this is simplistic and lacks sophistication. Instead: menacing: disturbing: threatening. Use a theaurus
2) Developing analysis. You have made no mention of sound nor lighting. Look at your coursework booklet for good examples of analysis and guidance about organisation. Pages 12, 14 and 15.
I am sending you all an email with an attachment on how to improve your case studies and planning.
I like the way you have organised your case study and the points you've made about Marion's blood going down the plug hole which is a convention linked to the swirling smoke of noir thrillers of the 40's and 50's.